This book for me was lacking in many aspects. I didn't care for the non-climactic fight at the end of the book. The book II from Jacob's point of view was completely boring to me. I would have rather seen Edward's view of events. Anyway my re-write is extremely different. There are no wolves, which mean no Jacob Black. That of course means no mutant freak spawn to keep Edward and Bella from happy time. I am not a fan of Nessie. She's more of a hindrance. My story is strictly spent on Edward and Bella but I am keeping all the Volturi scenes from the book. I may or may not add my own spin to it. I've only written four chapters so far; I'm working on fleshing them out more and adding quotes from the book to keep it flowing smoothly.
~ecc
~ecc
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